really good!

VERY NICE!

It's good. Needs a bit of improvement.

I like the idea. It sounds nice, but the main theme should be louder.
All you need is a bit less MIDI-ness.
Personally.. I don't agree with ellebirdy23. It doesn't need as much improvement as he says it does.

ok ok it's chill

Here's my score:
Instrument Blend--- 0/1
Accuracy--------------- 1/1
Clear Concept ------- 1/1
Originality------------- 2/3
Appeal----------------- 2/4

Total------------------- 6/10

Instrument Blend:
The guitars with the background made it fuzzy and hard to hear. I would've made a different choice myself.

Accuracy:
You've got the melody down ^_^ of course who doesn't know this melody?!

Clear Concept:
Mario Rock. I get it.

Originality:
The piece had it's own feel and everything, but there was room for more personality.

Other Comments:
I know I come off as a hard judge, and that's because I am. I did like the beginning of the piece a lot. If I had a suggestion, it would be to make the melody an octave higher; sometimes the melody got lost in the background.