Score: 10
"Zippity do dah"
date: April 17, 2009
Dark for a kid's song, but then again, we tell them fairy tales, which were at one time horror stories.
The melody is fantastic and my favorite, you manipulate it well and blend it into many other elements (like the choir), you give hope, you set up intrigue, then nestle it back down with dark turns.
The bass beats are pronounced but the percussion remains untapped, you mostly use quirked out cymbal taps and sharp snare hits, which is very complimentary when the song is really going. At 1:43 I can certainly appreciate the minimalism but small breakdowns like that with beats only leaves you a large opportunity to do something more, but then again, the way it only lasts about ten seconds, then busts back into the melody warrants what you did originality. Dunno, I'm torn.
Very well done
April 17, 2009
Author's Response:
I'm all out of faith, this is how I feel. I'm cold and I am shamed, lying naked on the floor.
*Blush
