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still a dongcopter

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First off, i have to say straight up, this track tends to get boring.. Some minor tempo/beat changes and maybe a change in general would be nice other than just added parts. I myself have caught myself doing that. Just adding new tracks every few repetitions and calling it good. It gets boring after a couple minutes.
Now..on to what really caught my attention.
This song has such a crazy atmosphere which feels so scary. It sets drum n bass music into a sort of underground dark world, you can get that from the ominous bass, scratchy synths that ALMOST come out and that drum beat to finish it off. This song creates it's own world and i could see it used in a video featuring post-apocalyptic cities or the undead...or both!
Good job, i liked your track for the most part, work on maybe a chorus though.

ExceptionalPants responds:

Thanks, I'm surprised people see so much atmosphere in this track. I'll see if I can work on some more complex stuff in the future.

Dnb is tough i no

im a big fan of DnB so im gonna wrtie while i listen...

ooo like the beginning, rly ominous...drums r comming in, theyre alright, not much to say....but then that other sound comes in, sounds like water dripping, or rather someone pissing...then another synth comes in...only drums...pussing and other synth enter again....ummm songs almost over and this isnt rly going anywhere....you dont rly change the beat up too much, just extend the fills a bit rly basiclly.... and then just drums at the end...

man this was alright, but i have a couple problems with it...

mainly... it doesnt rly go anywhere, the synth generally serve only as noise rather then introduce a melody, and then when the melody synth enter, its a bit hard to follow and doesnt introduce a...good(idk maybe i should say comprehensible or interesting) melody.....

id say add another lead, you got a nice progession, work off of that.. and also change the drums...the third time i heard the song they begin to stand out more and more.... i realize how hard it is to make DnB when i score you

ExceptionalPants responds:

Thanks, I'll look for better ways to score loops and synths in the future. I was sort of working on impulse with most of this stuff, because I seem to ruin stuff I think over too much.

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Score
Waiting for 2 more votes

Uploaded
Mar 17, 2009
6:11 PM EDT
Genre
Drum N Bass
File Info
Song
4.1 MB
2 min 59 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.