As I said in the first one, I loved the original melody, but I never liked that the song had no real bassline to it.
So I drove some more power into the song. Updated with song more intense stuff and a key change.
It's worth mentioning that I recorded the piano on six cups of espresso.
Tell me what you think :)
Not bad at all. I liked how you made the guitar deviate just a little from the original melody, how the piano went along that melody and even emphasized the lower notes, and also how at the end, you raised the melody up a few notes. However, I'm sorry, but I just don't hear this bass line that you're talking about. Were the lower notes just supposed to pop out more here?
Anyways, good work. You might consider hitting up my latest remake of GvP 1.2, which has a tad bit more noticeable bass line.
wow
You really improved it! I already thought this song was awesome, but you gave it a GREAT extra spark! Keep up the good work.
I hope you make another one!
Yeah!!!!!! maken a 10 for this
woow yhis song is fuckin awesome!!!!!!!!
Wow.
Wow.
5/5
10/10
Well,,,
Definitely worth an 8. However, there are a few bad things. Like for one, although i liked the whole bass addition, i dont appreciate the way you changed up the piano part. Not the melody, but the actual way the piano sounded. I loved the alterations to the guitar part, though. Also, at about 1:30 into the song, i liked the way the piano and guitar coincided. Pays excellent tribute to the original. Overall, pretty good job.
Well, the piano loops were recorded off of a Boston Grand Piano :) . I like to play the piano myself.
But thanks very much for the comment and rating :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
ScottStedman 
