Score: 8
"Interesting..."
date: March 16, 2009
It's not a perfect song, on the outside-there are some rough edges. I think the beat could use some work, but it But there's something in there that makes me nod my head just a bit anyway, and so I downloaded it, and then lyrics starting popping into my head. Want them? ._.''
So let me actually give some detailed feedback for once:
PROS
+4.00 - Catchy
+1.00 - Good mood (Calm)
+1.00 - No volume distortion
+1.00 - Simple and uncluttered
CONS
-1.00 - Simple
-0.50 - Background arp synth just... doesn't fit, imo
-0.50 - Kick and snare feel a little generic
-0.50 - Clap is a little too sharp/too far in front
-0.50 - Repetitive
OVERALL: 4/5
WEIGHTED: 8/10, because it's catchy, and I like it
DOWNLOADED: Of course
SUGGESTIONS: Soften the beat-especially the clap and the snare-and maybe change the arp around a bit? I can't really think of an instrument, or sample, or sound that would work better, but the current one just sounds... a little off, to my ears.
March 17, 2009
Author's Response:
While making it I would have friends over and they would randomly make up some lyrics to go with it, so I left it with a layout as a song, instead of melodies being the "lyrics. I don't mind if you send the lyrics, would be interesting to see what people can come up with.
Thanks for the review.