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Ok, this is one of my biggest projects ever.. O_O
Please listen to the whole thing ;)
It took me about 3 1/2 weeks to make it :P <(T_T)>
I hope you'll enjoy it ALOT! ^^

As usual, For all the 0 Bombers: If you vote 0,
just tell my why in a pm or review ;)
so that i at least know the reason why you 0'd.
So i know what you didn't like and i can keep on improving :D

Anyways, i REALLY hope you'll enjoy it as much as i enjoyed making it! :)

Peace out ! ~ [W]

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lol

of course i love you! <3
(good song btw)

weemeee responds:

LOVE YOU TOO! XD

The effort shows.

So here is how I'm going to break it down...

Intro (0:00 - 0:47): The bass was extremely fuzzy and it overshadowed the kick in the back. But there isn't much to say here other than you might want to equalize it a little. The break into the first part with the lyrics was decent and executed pretty well, however the bass came back and it just didn't seem right.

Buildup (0:48 - 2:07): A buildup should never take that long, and the snares went for 4 straight measures before hitting the chorus again. The crash cymbal was also missed when going into the chorus.

Chorus (2:08 - 2:33) Well, that wasn't very long...nothing else I can say than to lengthen this and shorten the buildup.

Bridge(2:34 - 2:57) Nice variation, but it lacks in substance.

Chorus and Outro (2:58 - 4:19) The chorus was, again, lacking. The outro, completely weak. Why would you slowly lower the volume during the outro when you are just going to end it with one final beat? Seems unneeded.

Besides trying to master this track, the melody was very exceptional and the little variations that kept it from being to repetitive. The effort and skill is there, but you need to hone them a little better. Also, on a final note, I would suggest changing the lead synth to something a little more appealing to the ear.

I liked it, and its a great start to a great song, but like I said, work with it.

weemeee responds:

Ok, i'd have to agree with you :) my buildups are mostly way too long XD

Thanks for the constructive review ! :)

Peace out ~ [W]

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Uploaded
Mar 15, 2009
12:58 AM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
6.9 MB
4 min 19 sec

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