Really good for a rookie
The insity could be better but thats A+ for a rookie and unrealdark stop being a showoff, bet u dont know wat real intensity sounds like either.
8/10 5/5
Peace BasSaGe XD
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Another Demo. It's not done yet, thats why its a demo. Nothing special yet :)
Vote fairly,
zero bombers, shoo!
{LDL}
wtf? Awesome song instead!
Good facts:
-I loved the intro with the piano, though it could've used an synth or pad with it, to combine makes it more 'fuller and richer' to hear.
-Loved you sick hardstyle kicks, same with the saws as lead.
Overall the structure of this song is good, also an great usage of leads/bass.
-At ?:?? you did an awesome original twist! I loved this transition trough the rest of the song. <- sorry forgot the time, and can't look it up because I am almost out of time. :(
Bad/Improvement facts:
- I miss pads, changes of basses, other kicks, and most of all claps or snares.
Even an ride would do the trick, it makes the song more enjoyable, and more professional to hear.
-Use another piano, this one is on low quality. Try using VST Nexus>Popkeys layered with another instrument.
-Could've used an more varaity of leads and effects/FX's. Try using bells, that does always the trick for me.
-Master/Mix this damnit! It's very crackling at some points, try to improve the quality. If you can't I would be glad to be of assistance.
Those are my pointers for the final product. Tell me when it's done, I would like to hear it! :D
5/5 8/10 - If you put my improvements in your final piece it'll be deffinately an 10/10. + download.
-Ian
Ps: sorry for the crappy review, didn't had much time, I'll be gladly to reply to you by PM if you need help or didn't understand something. :)
Also don't mind those 4/10 under here, those people don't know what REAL hardstyle is about.
LoopDaLoop responds:
Wow, I appreciate this!
The best review I had so far, so it is not crappy to me!
I'm quite new to this, so I appreciate any type of constructive criticism and this really helped me. I want to know what the people think. And why they think that. You told me the right stuff, i'll try to put your pointers in my song when its done!
Cheers!
{LDL}
kinda boring
wasnt bad, but the only thing i heard was the same sounding non-melody over and over for the first minute and half, and then at 2minutes, just some random stuff came in that did not fit in with the song
oo! AWFUL!
i dont like it one bit... 3/5
LoopDaLoop responds:
Not a problem ;)
But please, constructive criticism. Tell me why you dont like it ;)
Cheers!
in the beginning?
Out of curiosity, you are new at making music right? really sounds like mine did 4 months ago. But just simply continue and you will reach it! I'm not there yet, but I'm wating
LoopDaLoop responds:
I am sorta new yeah :D
I'll listen to your songs right away!
Thanks for the review!
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