Score: 6
"Not quite there yet."
date: November 11, 2009
This sounds almost exactly identical to the original, except for your adding random drums and lots of irritating sounds over the top. A simple adjustment of volume (QUIETER DRUMS) would earn this another point, but you have some deeper problems as well.
Also, if you're not going to loop, at least fade out.
Looking forward to seeing an improved version.