Another good song.
Looks like I've been running into a lot of good songs lately in the Review Request Club. I like how the song starts off slow pace and sad and slowly builds up a little bit. It still has a sad sound to it even though the song has picked up a little bit.
The length of the submission was pretty good and you had a pretty good assortment of variety throughout the song. It never really got boring. It had a nice use of sound effects.
The only thing that I can think of is that the ending just kind of sneaks up on you. It just kind of ends all of a sudden and to me it really doesn't sound like it should end where it did. Perhaps a series of notes that better resemble an ending or perhaps a fade out would work too. I rather the song end on a note, but to me it sounded like this was out of nowhere.
Other than that good job on the song.
~ Review Request Club ~
TheBellmaker 
