Score: 10
"Props"
date: March 3, 2009
You're raw man, you have a very raw voice. What that means is that with a mentor or a director kind of person, you could become a very good rapper. You just need to jump out of the track at the listener a little more and emphasise yourself.
I would be interested in hearing you write a three verse song, the theme would be something original, something about the world, an observation, a comedy story and filled with metaphors/punchlines. Just be more playful with the listener and make them feel you, so that every line you say, the listener is saying "yes I can relate."
March 4, 2009
Author's Response:
I'm working on that song man, the beat I'm working with is just amazing, when Im finished with it you'll be the first to hear it.
