Hmmm... Interesting...

I like how it sounds, but I wish you would elaborate on the sounds you us. Like it sounds like you are trying to do something with a scale at one point, but you cout it a bit off, before you could get all you could out of it. I liked the song as a whole, but I think it might sound better if you made the entire song longer and contenued with the sounds I guess is what I'm trying to say. Still, I like it :) Good job :)