Score: 8
"Hmm"
date: March 1, 2009
How did you make this? Was it strictly through mouse clicking in a program or did you record it through a digital piano, record a real one, etc.? The only reason I ask is because although I like the melodies, it needs some more/better shaping. That is, dynamics, hard/soft stuff. Right now, it seems all to be at one level.
Usually you can't tell that type of stuff with piano but when it's a slow solo like this one, it becomes really important.
If you get the shaping in there, I'd really like to hear this re-uploaded. :)
March 2, 2009
Author's Response:
Well yeah... it was made with a progrem and mouse clicking. I've tried to pay attention to the dynamics and don't let the song sound at one level... but I've wrote I'm not good with piano stuff so it didn't turned out that well.
I don't know if I'd ever make a re-arranged version. Still thanks for the review and the hints.