great!

Underated song. underated artist.

Could be better

The riff is nice. However! Your drum tracking needs serious work. It's not really the actual tracking that bugs me, it's the crash cymbal. It sounds like you used a splash sample. Remember to also vary your velocities on the drum hits. Maybe add some good ol' snare fills and stuff you create a whole, complete sound. Good work!

Good

But it needs vocals...
Get urself a singer?

if not uv a great future in video game music

I'd love to hear vocals with this

it would really put this song into perspective

Er...

Sunds too electronic, but beside it, it's good.