Score: 9
"wow!"
date: September 1, 2009
love the bell beginning with the wind and the bids - such vivid imagery!
I find your bass backing is too weak though - it feels like you have this wonderful heavenly start but the rest of the song is struggling to catch up - I recommend you listen to every song you make first with headphones -and then speakers :)
I love the lead though - almost sounds like a sytrus lead :)
this has massive potential - I hope you realize that :) - I can just picture in my mind how it should be - a heavenly spirited song that just whips you up - hugs you and then spins you off into the stars :)
try to make it like that :)
awesome start though!
-shawn-
September 2, 2009
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks for the review!
I've always felt like something was missing from this song. It feels empty. Kicking up the bass, and maybe varying it might fill that gap. Maybe I'll rework this song and re-release it. :P
Thanks for the helpful review! It really made me feel good! :D