Excellent Work Once More
You have done a great job with this piece. I truly enjoy the melody. It does, however, become a bit repetitive at times. It seems to be repeated throughout the entire song, or at least a majority of it. You change the voices that play it, but it essentially stays the same from what I hear. Repitition is not always a bad thing, it allows the listener to take in fully what is occuring what is going on within the piece, but too much could make it take a turn for the worse. My advice on any upcoming pieces is to make more variations on the melody within the piece, and bring out and further develop any counter melodies as well. Overall you did a great job and made a wonderful piece.