Score: 9
"[cont'd again] Something like, "look, a review!""
date: April 19, 2009
There's a bit of volume interference ~:46, but it actually sounds like it fits with the semi-crazy circus bell sound. And, same comments again: really well chosen instruments, tune, etc. I especially like the synths on this one, because they lend themselves to both the carnival sound and the VG sound.
I hunted down (i.e. Youtube'd) the original, and I like some of the things you've done. My favorite change is that you've brought the background forward a bit, so while the original is all about the carnival tune, your version has that oscillating tune between and behind the notes. And I like the drum solo at 1:30.
But you fade out at the end, you could've made this a 2 minute loop easily, and I know from your other songs that you make some awesome endings.