Score: 7
"Its good, but it does lack alot...:/"
date: March 3, 2009
Well it was a good song, its kind of basic in my opinion, but sounds well on its way to a nice song!
Good job on mixing in the vocals, and on the lead/melody! But your beat/bass is really just OFF so far in this one man... the loop is just way to high, and i am preeetty sure your using preset fills? =P Like, those are things i see as important to make yourself, 'cause if you dont songs just remind me of Ejay and stuff like that where you just assemple loops x) Try working on an ORIGINAL and powerfull beat that catches people, and ones who doesnt make people who has visited an FL with VEC samples "Omg, again?"... 'cause that honestly is the first thing i thought when i heard your loop/beat in this one, its just way to used up tbh =P
The bass, might not be quite what you want for this exact beat, IMO (maybe just my opinion, idk.) you may want to use a more sidechained one, atleast in the back to accompany this! One that makes the whole thing flow just a little bit more!
7/10
4/5
All in all a good song, but a bit basic! Great job on the vocals and the lead!
Thank you for your time.
-[ BeatSource ]-
March 3, 2009
Author's Response:
Hey, I tried :P. Yea I used a preset fill from VEC2, but I didn't think you guys would be able to pick that one out as easily. I can always try changing the bass, but idk. Thanks for the review!
