REMIXXXXX lol beat by youtube user Fichonn titled "Brutal Freestyle Beat"
Lyrical game player
press play rhyme sayer
Clocks bad hands foldin
broken turn heads greyer
in second place you holdin
Casket open this ya prayer
Drastic tokin
hot box walled in
Send pussies 9s jealous
point made em break
Mind steak
like imagine they rollin 8
Those boos sound like bovines
KO'd thinkin o sheep
grey heads dead
those times weep
Rhyme after every1 sleep
no1 can dream they won
I'm on a streak
Beef cant last a weak
spill salt on them wounds
I'm starving to eat
I need shit 2 last
more than a week
I'm rippin they mouth
they cant even speak
Flipin em flickin em
rollouts fire wreak
Bowser breathe
fire ball inhale technique
once reach ya peak
enlightment mind leak
Riped open
information takin(take in)
red(read) soak in tro patient
what happened?
BN holdin ink open
Minds they lines
lookin like heart beats
They writin me love letters
treats like skewed B's
Simply seen subway seats
meant 2 a track streets
Like Jay and Z
to end with ya love letters
i eat em re-treat
Sellin rides,
u need a train
or punchin a cheat
cant show ya fame
light guides
prayer needs knees
Knight rise
but you fall from defeat
Hand stand
the world at the palms of your hands
Fly high S A M's meet
the world held at ma feet
Yall planes need dimensional leaps,
mind blowin speech(1 DIMENSIONAL EMCEES CANT HANDLE RAP)
2:37
These 1 dimensional emcees
work on line
reality they miss n's, fine
They need another point
2 write in 2 D
When I exist 4D
free point that 20 2 me
They put it together
and rhyme that
While I subliminaly
smoke they raps
Dub sacks hit fat
cuz I smack they double D's
The way I battle Emcees
I hit in 4D
Meanin time is
on my side
cuz I own, watch
they lines is fruit punch
all squash
Done long ago
but they think they gods
Try and walk on water
against all odds
They runnin on snow
happy but they dont kno
That kold melt long ago
they dead tryin 2 inhale ma flow
Good to hear from you again Needle
Lotsa love for releasing the new track.
Like I said, I analyzed the shit out of your lyrics. Your metaphors and shit are dead on. Just keep your head up and your flow straight. =P
Favorite Line?
Hand stand... The world at the palms of your hands.
Nasty ass line. Never thought of it that way.
lmao, weed does amazing things, lmao jk altho i was high when writing the lyrics. Flow needs work i agree sir, lemme know when you get signed,
Much love
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Your flow is better but i think i found whats wron
When you record you a sound is being processed through your program about .7 seconds late. Making it seem as if your flow is not on point. Over great effort i always admired your will to never give up and improve. Much respect to you BN.
Yo dead ass i noticed some shit fucked up somehow, I tried turning every other program off n shit. Love reviews man, and thank you sir, I love watching myself improve aswell, much respect to you aswell Lej
Much love
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
Much much better than the original
This is HOT. Much Better flow and tone<3
And the new ending? fucking GREATT<3
Its perfect. My baby gets reaches new and higher heights with every track<33
ofcourse<3
PS More love<3
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Broken-Needle 
