Keep working on it
If you work on it alot more I would like it more. As it is it's kind of random. You can hardly hear the sound coming in at 0:14 too. Turn that sound up. Make it longer and add more sounds and it could be a good piece.
Okay, I know its not the GREATEST song in the world, but its my best work so far, inspired by a glass of citrus blood.
Keep working on it
If you work on it alot more I would like it more. As it is it's kind of random. You can hardly hear the sound coming in at 0:14 too. Turn that sound up. Make it longer and add more sounds and it could be a good piece.
okay, thanks
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.