*Edit* - I have decided to make two submissions of this. One with vocals and one without.
Latest DnB..enjoy
Listen to the whole thing people.
Forget the info..here's the lyrics
You really don't understand do you?
You've gone far from this place,
You're gone far from me,
Now, you're divided between my mind and my heart,
The difference between my heart,
The difference between my mind,
The difference between what you think,
But you really don't know what you've done to me,
But then again, I will never forget the things that you've done for me,
Now I'm stuck in this dilemma,
and for one thing,
this is out of control....
:Heart:
I wish that you,
would tell the truth,
I know I miss,
the times we missed,
To help you regain,
so much in pain,
forget the past,
we live so fast,
remember my words,
I love you damn it hurts,
how can I forget,
those times I don't regret,
Now lost from you,
You were hiding the truth,
This is out of control...
:Mind:
Even thought it's ruined,
here I am now cruisin',
A 50 mile dash,
looking for some bruising,
This shit will make me snap,
I'll find you on the map,
Finding my revenge,
Your man I want to slap,
Drag him out,
Push him out,
Make him want to shout,
Throw him of the cliff,
Think twice you'll start to doubt,
You'll never want to cheat on me,
Just because you think you're free,
That phone call that you made to me,
Now you don't want to see.
It's out of control
Breakbeat.
Nice breakbeat tune, reminds me of General MIDI.
Good ol times.
This tune, very sassy.
I like it, all the way, and I have a problem with the Vocals.
No offence, but it kinda... yeah as it said below, ruined the song. It's just not smooth, doesnt mix well.
Other than that, good job to you!
Vote: 5
Thanks...
I'm not sure about General MIDI..I hand crafted the breakbeat myself...which includes no presets and what not. Just time to figure out the placement and such, which includes multi compression, limiting, filtering, and other necessities.
I tried to mask my voice, sadly, my voice isn't the greatest in stuff like this, so I'm trying to figure a way to work around it, making it rightly crisp and professional. Voice procedures are what I'm still tackling, and yet to figure out the best ways to do it. Maybe first step is a professional mic.
Thanks for enjoying it!
Seriously awesome, except for one thing:
I hate to say it, but the vocals really did kind of ruin the song. Seriously. It's great otherwise.
Well thanks halfway :D I'm beginning to think about the reeverb control. Gonna have to play with it then...always wanted to get away with using my voice :\
:D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
InnerMan 
