Score: 8
"Fast is good."
date: February 11, 2009
The intro to this rather short bleep-fest was well paced and catchy. Up until :25, everything was going great. And then you just kinda abandoned the sweet buildup you had going and started it all over again. The second buildup was also good, but in a song as short as this, there's no time for reconstruction. Just gotta set things up and get it rolling the first time.
The melody was fairly unique and you kept the fast pace of the song under control really well. It's quick, but not wildly fast to the point where the listener feels like they can't keep up.
Overall, you did a good job, but you still need a climax. It felt like a rave was gonna start but it just kinda turned into a sewing circle, you know?
So all in all, more energy after :25 and you're set. =)
February 11, 2009
Author's Response:
Alrighty.
Thanks for the review! :D