Lol its quite strange..
Well, for one thing its really creative, but I'm not sure it would be something people would listen to over and over though. Most of the points I gave you came from the creativity, and I liked the ending. That dude got owned Haa! Keep it up and you'll become an awesome music DJ. Just one thing though, don't use the premade beats in your songs. Even though they were executed quite well in the song, it wasn't made by you. Still, keep it up!