Twas, Awesome

It was very good, I enjoyed this track, everything was good.. for the most part.. I think that the male vocal would sound way better with an auto tune or a robotic feel to it, like the microsoft sam sound, and also the song could use more buildup and a better climax, thus making it longer, but everything else was pretty good, and also a high freq saw synth would be AWESOME!

-BREAKDOWN-

Instruments: 4/5
Melody: 4/5
Emotion: 5/5
Length/Span: 3/5
Delivery 5/5

~DJ Ryo

Eh...

The intro is REALLY cool, and it gets you all pumped, but then I was let down. I was expecting some less mellow.

Got place for more

0:00-1:00 sounds like a too long intro. Maybe you could cut in it a bit and make the "meat" of the song longer? Because that "meat" taste good xD
So: Intro too long, cut in it. Song too short, be creative to spice that meat up (lol) with some new things. Use your creativity ^^

Overall, Pretty good. Nice melody

Feels great.

This song really gas a great feel to it. Really.
It sort of puts out the feeling of doing something to the utmost while trying to achieve it.
Don't know if that's what you were going for, but that's the feeling I got.

Great track. d[^_^]b

Awesome

Good job! I can't stop listening to it lol.