not bad
Drums are a little to brash in the beginning and towards the end. try taking their vol. down just a bit and bring it up to where it is now when the bass line comes in. the song kicks from :19 - :57. keep that bass going and maybe throw a new lead or melody over it to keep it interesting. also, some sort of transitional "noise" like a reverse cymbal would work well before :19 ... i dunno, find something that you like better to fit there.