Not bad

That sound at 1:01 really needs to go. It sticks out like a sore thumb. The chanting is pretty cool though, even if it is a joke. Not a bad attempt overall, and you are definitely improving.

Not bad

I've been checking some of your work, and you're getting better. I wish the snares would b less spaced out though, and the sample could've been utilized to a fuller extent if you used a turntable, there's one in Fruity Loops if that's what you use to make beats, if you need help finding it, message me or IM me on aim ma sn is brokenneedle25 anyway, good job got my 5 3.78 / 5.00 (+ 0.67)
Keep it pimpin'
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