SO COOL!

This is a blast! I like the main melody and its timing. Someone had a good idea about adding a twist at the end when it comes back in, which could be cool. I love the WAY it comes back in though, that is my favourite bit!

Great beats.

The beginning started a tad slowly. A bit too much repetitiveness, but when the drum beats enter it becomes alright.great beats. Once the whole of the composition has entered, the mix is a bit off. But other than minor mixing deals, great song

good

at the beginning i liked the filter, however the bass went off-key a few times.

and maybe not repeat the bass that many times at the beginning.

once the drums kicked in it sounded pretty cool, the sound went well with the drums, however it was hard to hear the FX in the background, they were noticable tho. (imlistening on headphones, so its of good quality)

when the sound all stopped, then nothin happened when it came back, that wasnt very good...

when you did the stop, you shouldhave went into like a chorus, took the main synth and made it into a 8 sec long rythem and repeated it with super drums or sumptin lol.

idk, you kept the main melody too long, if u keep it and dont change it for that long its very dis-pleasing.

however for the sheer beat of it you get a 7.

REALLY work on the repetitiveness, that thing wouldhave gotten you a 9 if you kept it at like 1 min long (cuz u repeated so much)

overall you had good filtering, and no sounds really overpowered eachother.

you shouldhave AT LEAST ended the song when it was fading out tho.... i thought that was the end and then im like omg its still going?
lol

good job tho
PaNdOrA

Its very esoteric

The off beat at the beginning set the tone for the song. This would go perfect with any sort of mind bending scene. Two people fighting while flying in the air, a halucenation, uh, other things. Thats all i can think of right now. The dnb by itself was very good, had a twisted air to it. And the melody that played was distant, but still felt attached to the song. As is the course, it was a little repetitive, but the song itself was different enough so that it didn't matter too much. The only thing is the quality seems a bit low, but oh well. Good work with this track.

Just What The Doctor Ordered!...

Could've done with another nice high arp in the mix somewhere I reckon, but this is exactly the sort of DnB I like. Straight-forward down and dirty. Sweet stuff, take more Antibiotics!