its good

but it doesnt change enough. need to spice stuff up, feels a little repetitive as is. hover this could work as the background to a rap or something i dunno

i'm feelin a mad scientist vibe...

lyrics off the top of my head...

Well it seems to me to be a little predicament
seein how i need to see ya bleed with dissembodiment
of ur soul and body that i can control not whole
but with many body parts i've taken at belltole
midnight strickes and lightning lights the skies
and time now is near...time to open your eyes..

Chorus:
I know u call me crazy, say my intentions are bad
i hear the words they Echoe...he's going going going MAD!!!

that's all i got lol

Think its sweetness

Real nice man, this a bad ass beat. The intro is good and exits perfectly. Right on! peace

I think

i think niice

(might need vokals, I think)