Score: 10
"great"
date: December 7, 2009
ok, you are great at making music and i've never had a music lesson in my life, but i'm still going to tell you what i think needs improvement =p.
first off, don't get the wrong idea, i think this is as awesome as the next guy, i'm just giving some constructive criticism here.
it would really help if i had some musical terms to help explain this but anyway... from about 00:43 to 01:00, there are voices singing, but they seem to suddenly stop and start, and i think they should all fade away, or else it sounds a bit choppy (choppy, is that the word?) anyway, the same thing happens at 1:43 to 1:58.
