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Resubmitted because of those ZEROBOMBING WHORES!!! There's more added on to it though.
I attempted to make an "epic" song, and I have to say that this attempt went very well. I need feedback though.
The scene is this: You're marching to a battlefield. You and your comrades are silent, but bristling in anticipation.
It's not done yet, but it will be done in a matter of days.
absolutely freaking epic beyond reason
i do second MH16's comment that it lacks a little power at :16. it almost sounded like you were using a drumset crash rather than concert crash cymbals. maybe a little more reverb on low winds and a (i dont know if i should really say this) louder bass drum. you did about the best tempo change i have heard in a long time. it caught the listener off guard and just plain sounded great. score another one for b.a.b.!
Thanks man, and I already got to addressing the drum problem. Actually, I reorchestrated the whole thing using new instruments and better soundfonts. SF2midi is probably the greatest site in the world.
Thanks again man, I may upload the newest version, but I wanna tweak it a bit more.
Thanks again man! Peace!
I like the intro with the harp and that that trombone(?) comes in. That's a pretty cool start.
Then at 0:16 the song gets in a new section, but i do think it needs a lot more power. Heavier drums and a low horn maybe? Just a suggestion :P
The choir that comes in at 0:52 is perfectly timed and fits good with the rest of the instruments.
Also i think that the ending is too abrupt.
That are some some good and less good (not bad) points in the song.
Overall, my score is a
Thanks man, I'm actually in the process of reorchestrating this whole section. And the ending was a bit abrupt because I want to add a "war" section to it. What you heard was just the march.
Oh and those were french horns, not a trombone lulz. The trombone comes in later in the song actually.
I'm thinking of replacing the general brass stacs with a tuba. And I do need heavier drums, these things are weeeeeaaaaak!
Thanks for the review man, always good to see your reviews.
aah shit honey....
amazing bells or w/e in intro
those are some epic strings
this is totally a battle scene from like warcraft, IF you put faster drums in there
atm this is more like a marching scene
really good shot at the epicness man, hit right on the mark
let me know when this masterpeice is finished
I lol'ed at the title of your review.
About the slow drums, you're right. This is supposed to be the march before the battle. I'm getting ready to put the war part on, but I'm stuck as to how I'm gonna blend it in. I'm thinking of putting a drum solo section right where this ends, then bring in the EPICNESS!!!!!!
I hope I can actually finish this one though, if not, this will be the 5th WIP that I abandoned.
I think it's quite nice... composition wise...
I think the only problem is it's just not THAT original. It's sounds like many videogames tunes we hear around. But don't give up, you've got talent and you've got to start somewhere.
Glad to finally see a review of yours.
You think so? I can definitely tell you that the harp intro was inspired by the curse zone song from Castlevania. The rest was actually inspired by Danman87 and Paradoxphenomena. But I did get my start in VG muzik.
Come to think of it, I did use a lot of stock melodies (melodies that have been circulating around my brain for a while and I either hummed or actually put in a different song) for this song.
But I'm surprised that you think I'm new at this, I've actually been doing this for 9 months now and have more than 50 songs under my belt now. Granted, the first 40 blow monkey dick, but the rest are okay, thanks to this site.
Wow, my response is longer than your review lol.
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