regarding ALL of your improvisations
I listened to nearly all of them in order, this being the last one.. few comments about your style that you might be aware of, but i just thought i'd let you know:
- a lot of your songs sound the same cuz you start in a minor and resolve to a major.. try more variety, maybe some modes? (chromatic, pentatonic, blues and half-diminished modes make good variety)
- chordal! i can NEVER criticize anyone for writing in chords because i do that myself.. but i get so angry for getting stuck in harmonies and making my right hand chords or arpeggios. Try unresolved extentions in your chords instead of triads and such (like adding a 9th or 11th to the top).
- spice the rhythm up a bit. i personally found that even rap and latin music can help with classical / romantic music, especially when it comes to melodies -- being latin myself, that influence especially helps me :)
I think thats all.. don't take this as discouragement, those aren't necessarily bad traits but things you should add to your music knowing the other options. That's my two cents.
Ra(ph)DaFoo