Score: 10
"Excellent song, excellent!"
date: February 1, 2009
Only problem that I can think of, which I'm sure that everyone would agree with me, is that the flute sounds weird. I'm not sure whether you intended it to be that way, but it doesn't seem to follow the beat too well.
By far, I like the dynamics that you infused in this song more than anything else. Makes the song sound really beautiful.
Beautiful chord choice. I can't make any suggestions on that front. In fact, I'll be honest, I can't really make any suggestions at all on this song, it's really that good. Piano melody was a great choice, string and string dynamics were exceptional except for the fact that they sounded just a little synthy on sections. I'm not really worried about that, because it's still a beautiful composition.
I can sense just how much work went into this song.
Meaningless suggestions to improve song
: Possible addition of a little cresendo at the end to finish it off.
: At 1:29, I notice that the strings blot out the flute. Not a big problem, hell it may even be my headphones, but that's what I noticed.
: More dynamics with the flute. Also a slight reduction on the breath of the flute.
That's all I can think of. 10/10 5/5 favorited and downloaded. Excellent composition!
February 3, 2009
Author's Response:
Well, I was experimenting a lot with this piece. For the most part though I'm glad it turned out the way it did. I know the flute sections need more work. However, given more attempts I'm sure I can get it better, I just need to keep at it. Thanks as always for those improvements, meaningless they may seem but it goes a long way to helping me spot many a bits I tend to miss. Always glad to hear from you. Thanks for the great review.
