Score: 10
"ooo i like it ;D"
date: January 28, 2009
ok, at first i get an image of a couple prisoners locked deep within an underground cave. As a guard passes by their cell they grab him and pull him against the bars, and use his keys to open the gate. They quickly take the guards armor and share it among the prisoners. They where sent to kill the leader of this place, and kill him they shall. As they split up and begin to head deeper into the cave, chaos is unleashed, They go cage to cage unlocking other prisoners. As more guards come one man's focus is turned to the horror around him,(1:08) men fighting men, flaying eachother open with swords and axes, burning eachother with magic unleashed and men falling down to eachothers might, for a second it looks the battle may turn in their favor, Then out of the gloom comes a terrible voice (1:55) The leader of the caverns has arrived, fully covered in armor with his black-as-night mace held high in hand. He calls forth with a voice only found in nightmares for the prisoners to return to their cells, that he will spare them. BUt that is not to be had among the loyal prisoners, they glance at eacher in the lul of cambat and share their last moments with eachother with a nod, then the fray is continued (2:40)the prisoners are backed into the rear of the chasm, deeper and deeper they go. And as the last man stands to face their target, pinned against the wall at the bottom of the chasm, the leader faces him. And as they engage and their weapons meet. The music ends.
to me i saw something truly epic, it was really really well done AWESOME collab between the 2 of you :D. keep up the good work :D
lol forgive my poor grammer/whatever. was typing in a hurry it all came so fast ;D
January 28, 2009
Author's Response:
Wow, that story was epic! That scenario fits almost perfectally... And your grammer mistakes were completely forgivable, no ones perfect. :)
