Score: 10
"Perfect for a horror scenario"
date: June 9, 2009
I love this freaking track. As it says in the title, this would be great for a horror scenario.
The picture put in my head: A destroyed city plaza, perhaps remnants of
World War ll. A woman wakes up in an alley, confused as to where she has come to be at. She wanders out into the center of the plaza, looking around. She feels cold, as if there is wind, but nothing is moving around her. Not even the leaves on a dying tree. A muscular man, begins to stalk her. He has heavy bandaging over his face, stained with blood. He is holding a rusty combat knife. She begins to walk towards a gate, which is locked. As she turns around, the man is 10 yards away from her. He stops, not uttering a word, not taking a breath, but staring. She tries to talk to him, but he simply stares. She begins to walk away, and the man seems to follow her movements directly with his head. She walks about 1 mile away, hoping to find out where she is. She comes upon a town. It seems to be untouched by the war, but empty. Like a ghost town. Desolation. She hears a scream coming from a nearby residence. The woman feels compelled to act. She opens a door to the home, finding two corpses, strewn across the floor. Each one, precisely cut across their throats. As she turns around, trying to flee, the last sight she ever encountered was a rusty blade.
June 9, 2009
Author's Response:
Wow thats pretty deep. Great review! Thanks a bunch!
Someone should write a flash to your story.
Glad you enjoyed it. :)