Very good job
I can't really think of constructive criticism, but I think you should go on with it, even though it is hard to stick with one thing for a long time. MAKE MOAR! :)
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This is something I've been working on for quite some time now.
It is pretty raw material still. It is difficult for me to go on with it. But with your comments I might get it going :)
Manhart responds:
That's just cool dude :))
I will try to make it longer and better for you :D ! MUCH BETTEEERRRR!!!
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