Score: 8
"Bout to leave a long fucking review here son."
date: May 10, 2009
This is defiantly a good start man but needs so much more.
The whole thing is more like two intros, there isn't really a hardcore dubsteb alle breve drum break down like most dubstep tracks.
The intro needs more then just the drums, it needs something to fill it.
- Maybe a pad or maybe something like a soft, short and stubby sub-bass.
There needs to be some transition into that bass, although I like its smooth and wobbly feel.
It has good fills as well.
The whole track needs some more noise, it's generally empty all around.
Drums need a fuck ton of work.
On your main break down, after the intro, you need to add another REAL breakdown, stronger drums, and a reese.
Your composition also lacks, it's missing way too much parts, is repetitive, and needs a breakdown like before.
I also don't really like the effects used, their kind of random and don't really add to the feel either.
Like how you dropped the bass out on the double kick pattern.
The outro sucks, lol.
The mixing needs work, the song is weak.
The mastering is great.
Good:
1)
The intro is good but needs more.
- Ideas listed above.
2)
The bass is really smooth and wobbly, I love it and its fills.
- Although it needs a back up with a main break down.
3)
Mastering was like perfect.
- Sounded so smooth.
4)
Drums need work, but they did add to the feel of the current song.
Bad:
1)
Composition, theres no breakdown or halfstep break down, also the outro sucks.
2)
Mixing, the sounds didn't fuse too great.
4/5:
I'd love to do a remix of this, I'd pimp it out so much haha.
Send me the raw files if your cool with it.
Check my shit too,
SSP - Sam
May 18, 2009
Author's Response:
fuck, i appreciate the feedback man...bless
