Score: 9
"Great!"
date: August 17, 2009
Song fits well with its original purpose - that is, western-ey. It has nice visualization, the tone of the song makes it really easy to picture a lonely desert rider, flowing into other moods in excellent transition.
But, as you said, the guitar needs a bit of work - in parts it sounds closer to a piano. A more metallic tone and a (complicated) "sweep" of the notes (to simulate a strum), or a more dramatized one if it is already present.
9/10 for another great piece.