Good voice, weird lyrics
You know, you've got a nice voice, and I enjoyed the song, but your lyrics are a little odd. There are parts where you sound like you couldn't think of anything to write. Maybe thats just me.
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****I HIGHLY recommend listening from 5:44 onward-- that's the best part of the song, to be honest. The rest is shaky.****
[UPDATE: Jan. 28-- MICHhimself has kindly remastered the track for me, so if you're interested in hearing a version that doesn't peak and clip, please listen again and download. Thanks.]
Yes, that says VMX, not RMX. The full title is: Pulstate - More Than Words (Lira Yin's Vocal Mix)
I did this because I fell in love with the original mix, which you can listen to here: http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/140035 (remove the space)
A couple of months back, Pulstate and I were tossing around a rework of More Than Words. Though this was eventually nixed, I did write a set of lyrics for it I really liked and a melody to go with it. Today, I went ahead and recorded it. With Pulstate's permission, I'm posting my interpretation of the track up.
Technical blabber:
-Simply put, Pulstate's original instrumental + my vocals = this.
-This was the first time I've done effects on my own vocals. I'm aware the mastering is shoddy, and am trying to get help with that.
-I did everything in Audacity. Ended up with about four vocal tracks and countless bits of chopped-up vocals with effects that I mixed into one giant track for ease.
These lyrics are dedicated to and inspired by my own more-than-words experience with life, love, and music in 2008.
Comments and feedback welcome!
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myspace.com/lirayin
myspace.com/pulstate
pulstate.newgrounds.com
(Lira's VMX)
More Than Words..........
club - ilike
Fucking incredible... Seriously...
You know what your doing here girl... incredible singing - incredible track... bring back that classic thrillseekers style of trance, I have truely missed this genre ... I think I would like to hire you for one of my tracks... seriously. :P
Nice
Very lovely, got a nine because I just felt some vocal parts were out of place. That's about it! Great song!
Needs a little improvement
Firstly I'm going to say thank you.
I've been waiting for a Vocal of this song since Pustate released it.
If you want my honest opinion... You got the voice wrong... I'm not saying it's bad... It's just a little too 'throaty' to fit, almost as if you sang it throatily through a long, thin pipe. (Just try it, you'll get what I mean).
The lyrics were ok, but I think you used a few too many syllables in some parts, which kind of broke the flow of the song.
I fell in love with this song because of it's long, wandering sound, and from hearing your Synthetica stuff with Nal1200 I know you can pull it off.
Sorry if I'm not very clear with my explanations. I don't know the slightest about making music, I just know how to listen to it ^^
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