Cool

Dude you should make more songs like this. This song is the best song I have heard so far on NewGrounds.

piano divine "return"

its awesome but now you do get what the clipping that also a guy below tells, you just needed to work that, that and the ending, don't do it so rough :(

Nice...

I'm liking the drums a lot. And those are those excellent sounding samples too aren't they? well your drums sound very nice. the piano sounds a lot better too, did you just add re verb or did you find a complete new Vst? The strings are also a nice addition to this piece as well. I can't really find anything that could use some fixing in this song. congratulations!

Sorry to review it this late, I haven't been on NG in like 5 days or something. Nice song, I think it is your best song yet.

5/5
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A lion does what? R--R

Interesting piece - but the constant clipping is turning me off a lot. Please try to fix this by cutting the piano levels or something. Anyhow, I'll try to review the rest as best as I can.

The overal progression and structure of the piece is simple but works well enough. Some of the parts could use some tweaking though. The piano part sounded kind of stiff to me - I'd try humanizing it to some degree, especially since it's a pretty simple part to begin with.

The drums were a bit unexpected, but they work alright. The only thing is that after it stops, it doesn't play again until that final splash in the end, a good 40 or seconds later. I think you should try to keep it throughout, if only intermittenly, to give a better sense of balance.

The strings and flute parts were well done, though. They nicely punctuate the harmony and melody, respectively.

All in all, probably a nice effort, but it's hard to remain completely unbiased in light of the distorted audio.

WOW!

That was awesome! A lot better than your first one!