wow this great youve got me listening

thru the entire song when i usually just speed thru songs and listen to them later but wow very nice w/ the voices the snare is great and in tempo great the synths are great and the ending how you made repetitiveness into awesomeness was probably a tricky thing to do nice 10/10 on snare 9/ 10 for the voices 10/10 for the base 200/200 for the transitions and 495/500 out of the whole song great job keep the good work ^_^

Good

Main pad is too whispy raspy and whistly. CHANGE IT NOW! Use a nice sharp lead or Gate or Arp.

Not bad but...

I really expected more of this track. I think your demo is better than this song. The final version is almost the same that the demo version! and the best part of the demo is not used here. You dind't change the main pad. I think it doesn't fit very well. it's too loud sometimes

And the song is very short. Only 2:26? For a final version is too short, I think

Not bad (the melody stills being great) but it could be much better

I am the...excited man!

Very well put together.

Each section was not repeated too much to bore the listener, but not too short to become an uncomfortable jump.

And of course, great job in coming back to the main music beat...so often musicians forget this essential thing...THERE IS ALWAYS A MAIN PART and you repeat this part within different sections.

well done.