bam!

make more!!!

nervous randomness

I cant tell what you're going for. kind of feels like that mortal kombat theme song. But the real difference is the coherency of the music. i felt like that plucking boing type instrument was too random. If you had made it a little simpler it would sound much better. Also a fun trick is to make a beat first and make the instruments work FROM the beat so that it is easier to listen to. good luck! keep on loopin!