more epic....

the string work is amazing and a flute by the end was great ^^, the drums were ok, in general a good song....

hmmm

Use of syncopation is well thought of along with the additions of instruments throughout the piece. This time the ocarina seemed out of place. The snare could've been a bit more pushing. At about the 1:00 mark, the violin seems quite out of place in the piece. The ocarina sticks out unwelcomed in the piece. Doesn't work in loop. 3.5/5 7/10

Very nice :)

You have a good sense of melody and a good understanding of harmony in a static key (staying in one key). My gripe with this is the way the themes just keep stacking on top of each other and don't seem to go anywhere and while the lines do work well together they don't flow all that naturally. Also you should try and add some contrary motion and dynamics as well as harmonic variety. This is just my opinion and ofc you should do as you feel right and you do compose great themes and melodies, it's just the underlying structures that make them a bit dull sounding to my ears. Keep making tunes and listening to great composers, you've got a good thing going here and if you are only 16 as your profile says, you're very well on your way!

Very well done.

It sounds really professional, this is a great track. My only question is what sound bank are you using? The instruments sound really alive.

WHOA

HOLY CRAP I LOVED IT! GREAT DRUMS AND STRINGS! ONE OF YOUR BESTS!