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"oh my god...i have to try writing again..."
date: February 18, 2009
a young man is staring out the window of the castle that is being sieged by the enemy,an entire horde of orcs,many of his bretheren dead,he sighed,looking down, he turned to his captain. "Sir,i request that you let me go out there!" he shouted to his captain. the captain nodded "yes,i will allow you and another squad to..." the young man cut him off. "no....just me..." the captain stood. "Are you mad!?! there is no way you will survive! it's suicide!" the young man shouted. "i am tired of watching my bretheren die! i will go out there and make sure this is the last war those beasts ever fight!" the captain sighed and nodded. "go...tales will be told of your bravery today..." the young man started to walk away when the captain called to him. "Hey!" the young man turned as the captain tossed him a beautiful black blade, three sparkling rubies in the hilt,his fathers sword,the sword of the legendary hero. "make sure YOU are the one to tell them." the young man nodded and walked to the gate,when it opened he stared at the coming orcs,his sword in one hand,a beautiful red blade with three onyx gems in the hilt,a sword his father made for him,and his fathers sword in the other. "today i die....but my soul will live on!!!" he charged into battle not a young man,but a hero...
there is my story,hoped you like it
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