idk...

The main melody noise clashed alot with the drums.
they fit together in a way, but they still clashed alot.

the padding in the bg was pretty nice. i know that was done in fruity cuz i recognise the sound, but you couldhave done way more with that sound, you made the same melody repeat WAY to many times.

less repitition, and more sounds.
then it would be way better

NeMiSiS