I agree with the others
With a bit of work this song could make it to the top. Keep working at it!
this song started merely as an exercise in adjusting pitch and effects on synths, but ended up turning out as a (as far as i'm concerned) half-decent song.
I've called it Echo's Dream in referance to the Nymph Echo from ancient greek mythology. if you don't know her story, go look it up. she is a rather depressed person, for obvious reasons, and she is also the litteral meaning of the word echo. this song is kindof sad and it echos in some places, thus the title.
anyhow, i cordially invite you to listen, rate, and review as you see fit.
I agree with the others
With a bit of work this song could make it to the top. Keep working at it!
Not bad
A bit minimalistic, and it kind of falls apart at 1 minute, but the intro part isn't horrible. Those are some nice bells
Shallow...
I am a fan of mythology, I say this song could need some improve. For example, the beats are off and don't match with the current song. Just put in a few tweaks here and there, adjustments here and there, this and that, and your song should be much better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.