production value.
This might be a good song, but you need to work on your mic technique.
It sounds to me like this was recorded with one cheap mic somewhere in the room where everyone was playing, am I wrong?
I can hear drums and... is that a synth doing the weird eastern sounds?
I think that's a guitar, but the tone isn't so hot and it must be on the wrong side of the room.
I'd love to hear a real recording of this song.