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Hello!
So this is a piano piece i've been working on for a while i came up with the main melody a long time ago, and i decided to make into a full piece, i hope you guys enjoy it and any tips comments or advice is greatly appreciated, i'm always looking to get better ;)
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Average Score: 5.0 / 10

Score: 10

"very nice."

by: dogstar4god

date: January 9, 2009

It does seem incomplete.

But i do know what it is.
1) The title doesn't suit the song.... i kept waiting for the song to explode... it never did.
2) the piano does lack depth. you'd be better off with a usb mic and an acoustic piano; The piano is an amazing instrument to listen to, but you can't play an entire piece solely on a keyboard.

January 10, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the 10! I might re-release this song with more instruments like strings etc. And if you go too lostcausemusic (all 1 word) then you can see what me and my band did with this song, so if you prefer think instruments would make this song better, check it out there (we got guitars singing drums etc.) Thanks!

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"Great song..."

by: Xeptic

date: January 5, 2009

But I can't help but feel it's incomplete somehow. I can't really put my finger on it, it feels like there's too much going on, which makes it a little less easy to listen to. The piano is also a little loud at times. Oh, and it could also use some strings or something else to go with it. Anyway those are just minor complaints :), it's a good song now, but it would be a great if you managed to get those couple of things right! Did you actually record yourself playing, or did you record the song with computer software?

January 5, 2009