*EDIT* I've changed the drums. A Lot, looking for critiques, for the final version. Thanks for all your help! Especially the build up. I removed the cymbal chokes and added something else. Don't know the technical word, so, just have to listen to hear it. haha.
Clear your Cache, if you have already listened to this. :D

So over the holidays I completely revamped the music to my old song "A hero's Bottle". Basically its a song about struggles with pretty much everything. The bottle represents life. bla bla.

Here is where I geek out.
I originally wrote the song, inspired by my favorite vocalist on this site. XxCrucifiedxX. Check his page here:

http://xxcrucifiedxx.newg rounds.com/

I uploaded an old version with quick instrumental and sloppy vocals. And recently deleted it.
Then I asked Crucified if he could throwdown on my new version. He did. He sure the hell did.

HE FUCKING KILLED IT.
I've been waiting a while to upload it, but can't wait any longer.
Here it is.

Hero's Bottle
Lyrics/music
By Bad Man Incorporated © 2008
Vokills by XxCrucifiedxX (kickassery)

When the bottle hits the floor
I wanted to lay down and die
Another day will come and go
Too many days for me to cry
When I stopped and reached the end
I couldn't even ask me why
Only a battle begins again
The bottom points up to the sky

Standing broken
Standing broken

Pour the past into my hands
Let it slip into the drain
An empty bottle there stands
Just a way to ease the pain

Don't believe a word that's said
I only say what I need to
Every chance the problem gets
I only deceive you
I play the part of human kind
This bottle is our greatest find
A clearer thought of better times
A window to my other life

Standing broken
Standing broken

Pour the past into my hands
Let it slip into the drain
An empty bottle there stands
Just a way to ease the pain

*soft break*
*solo*

Pour the past into my hands
Let it slip into the drain
An empty bottle there stands