Score: 6

"Now where have i heard this before..."

by: DjCompass

date: January 4, 2009

Garage Band, am i right? You should try to change up the tunes a little bit, maybe swap out the instruments, try to make it more your own. Search around the internet, there's almost certainly tutorials somewhere that touch on making your own original music in Garage Band without needing to record things yourself.
As a song by itself, decent tune, the changes between instruments were perhaps a little bit sketchy, but it generally fits together pretty well. The beat fits nicely with your choice of tune.
But seriously, originality is the key here. I could make exactly this myself if i had a mac and half an hour, if that.

Score: 7

"it was alright"

by: josethewar

date: January 4, 2009

but there were many areas of improvement

Score: 7

"Pretty good"

by: airelite

date: January 4, 2009

It's good but in the begginning with electronic drums there are way too many pauses, later on it got really good. I think that you should have made the elec. drums and heavy bass and guitar playing all at one time, not just drums pause drums pause guitar. Good Job!