Score: 9
"A piece of advice."
date: January 19, 2009
If you don't want the criticism, just switch programs and stop placing yourself in a position where people can easily target you. Yes you might have sampled the song, but it's distorted and sounds quite bad. Again, sounds like loops. Not necessarily a bad thing, but loops are supposed to be a background beat.
Drum and Bass artists use loops for the background on top of their own patters to fill and spice up their tracks. Some dance artists like myself use hihat loops to variate the percussion a bit.
Try branching off onto better programs and furthering your skill. I can see you've got some good ideas, but GarageBand can only take you so far. Might I recommend looking into Reason or ProTools?
See ya.
January 22, 2009
Author's Response:
My programs are limited as a mac user. I have some programs im working on thought that aren't at crappy.