Eh?

Was this suppose to be chaotic or something soft?

Hardly Chaotic

It's a nice piece, but it's far too ordered to be called Chaotic Freedom - if you were going for that, you should really have pushed the boat out, giving us something that really doesn't care about how it sounds, for example.

I think that the next logical step for this is to make it longer and add some more variation - it just sounds like a crescendo of similar sounds, each trying to outdo the volume of the last one that played. Experiment with the sounds and always remember that you can make them quieter, to get yourself something that ends up nicely sounding like a release, rather than a collection of competing musicians.

[Review Request Club]

Nice

The slow build up is done pretty nicely, but it sounds a bit too generic. The guitar was unexpected and made this song a lot better (even though FL guitars sound pretty awful).

Corky is right, the cymbal at the end doesn't really fit there. You should try to end this song in a different way. Maybe with a hold guitar note or with a good old fade out.

{ Review Request Club }

Hm not too bad.

I do like how it starts off slow and then starts to get faster as the song goes on. It just seemed too much like premade loops. I do like the sound of the song though. It's kind of darker and reminds me of a scary video game for the sega or another old console like that. I think you could have worked on the ending a little bit too because the crash cymbal that was used at the end didn't do justice to the rest of the song in my opinion.

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is different

is good, i like it was progressive, the intro was nice and a little bit calm but has a good beat
then the guitar was awesome, hard and without control, but the guitar sounds a little bit simple, i recognize it, is the fruity loops basic guitar one, and it has a lot more potential, i wish you changed it a little bit, anyway it was a cool one